LuthfiRZ

I have made a lapse in my judgement.
          	
          	I thought I could cramp the plot of Crysis 1 and 2 in a single chapter. Boy how wrong i was.
          	
          	Definitely gonna do a rework on the next chapter, and put maximum effort on it.

RafaelRamirez050

@LuthfiRZ me too
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UnseenUrge

@LuthfiRZ i will be cheering for you on your story author you can do this!
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BlockedUser01

Hey, I just want you to know that "Iori Kanaga"(Blame121) has copy another author's work from another website.

BlockedUser01

The original work is "It Started With Devils & Artefacts" on webn*vel. He just copy it and change name to "Daily Life Of The Inventor In Anime Worlds" then published on Wattpad, Fanf*ction, and P*treon . The way he post is just 1 chapter split into 3-4 smaller chapters. Here the link to original work. https://www.webn*vel.com/book/it-started-with-devils-artefacts_22233744805060005
            Replace * with o on the word webn*vel for the link to work.
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PhngNguyn728610

how do you think about my story?

PhngNguyn728610

@LuthfiRZ thank, i will improve it
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LuthfiRZ

@PhngNguyn728610 story- wise it's fine, but probably don't need to put too many sentences in a single paragraph to make it easier for others to read i. I know I'm struggling with it too in my own story
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ChaoticVoidReader

Is there any update on the next chapter ?

ChaoticVoidReader

@LuthfiRZ, no worries, you can take your time it's a good story. I just wanted an update. Thanks.
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LuthfiRZ

@ChaoticVoidReader I'm roughly at 80%, since I don't want to rush things out and make sure I didn't miss anything. And I might as well edit some of the previous chapters as to not retcon the incoming chapters
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