Just so you know, I've spent fifteen years devolping my inner critic. Thanks to you, she now lays twitching on the floor. She keeps muttering "must read more" like a demented zombie and will undoubtedly keep me awake until I finally give in and...well, read more.
Your story and the drawings. If anyone ever says the drawings don't add to the story, smile because their jealous.
BTW, I adore how your mixing the visuals of manga with a more traditional novel. It reminds me of the Death Note spinoff novels.
Enough fangirling for now!