BookDragonNyx

My first time posting for a story. I wanted to let you know how much I am enjoy it and can't wait for more chapters. 
          
          Wonderfully, enticing, and well thought out plot.  Nice change of pace to some of the other beast world stories. Love the FL is strong and able to fend for herself, while embracing the new world she is in. 
          
          Very well written and a great flow to the story. Small errors ( absolutely not nitpick, I know how you can get lost in the story and forget little things) in some of the names, Clay is referred to as Colt at one point. And who is where in the story. Alder is digging then consoling someone who is grieving. Unclean when Thorne and the FL mate. Small things like this, however they don't take away from the overall plot of the story. 
          
          I love the family dynamic you have created. All very loving. Sometimes I will feel bad with the other beast story because no matter how hard the FL tries you still feel bad for the beast who feel jealous or hurt when they are not spending time with the FL. It more about a whole family. 
          
          Can't wait to read more. Please kept updating :)

Quick_t-kapsa1

Really loved the story!
          It is a well written story , I fell in live with the unique plot and the brave and kind FL . 
          I liked the detailed description of the story's characters and their feelings . The POVS of the males made it so enjoyable to read . 
          The only fault I could give bout the novel is the lack of chapters as I finished it to soon . 
          Also well done on the vocabulary and grammar used in the novel . You used sophisticated words to better describe everything throughout.
          
          I am excited to read more chapters of this wonderful story and hope you are enjoy writing it to the end so we can also enjoy more chapters of this novel . （＾ｖ＾）Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ(☆^ー^☆)(°∀°)b

LyndseyHale8

@Quick_t-kapsa1 . Thank you for your kind words. I am loving writing this story, and the comments really do make me smile.
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