LynnieThePoohBear

Fifth chapter of Say the Word is up!!
          	
          	A lil sneak peek:
          	
          	"Feathery breath tickles my hands and I find myself leaning further forward. I know I want to kiss him. I sense his breath hitch in anticipation and I slow my motion, suddenly more nervous, suddenly caring that our first kiss might be in a cab, might not be alone."
          	
          	Hmm do they kiss? Read on to find out ;P

Nesha132

Hey. if you don't mind can you read my story " the birth of Revenge "   for me and give me feed back please. I would really appreciate  it ; )
          
          
          And can I point out that me and you used the Same name --- Vincent  --- in one of our books. ;)

Nesha132

@Nesha132 thx and yeah sure ;)
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LynnieThePoohBear

@Nesha132 haha great minds think alike!
            And yeah I'd love to read it! I'm a little busy for the next two days but I'll definitely get to it. Would you mind doing the same for me? I always love feedback!
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btallon

Hi! Could you read Inner Beauty for me? I would love your feedback! Thanks in advance :)

btallon

Haha! I always wished I had the attention span to write longer chapters, but it never works out.
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LynnieThePoohBear

@btallon haha dw I understood. And thank you!! I enjoyed your story too. Ironically, I found it really pleasant that your chapters were short xD I guess I'm a hypocrite?
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btallon

I'm loving your story! Your chapters are a bit longer, so it will take some time to get lots of feedback in but I plan on reading even more laterN it is definitely going in my library. Thank you so much for all the feedback you are giving me. And I meant the words with ly at the end are filler words! Sorry for the confusion there lol
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onlygoodawaits

Hi, thank you for the follow! Btw, I lovvee your username ♥
          Please check out my book , Classified Pursuit, if you ever get the time? 
          Thanks, enjoy your day! :D

onlygoodawaits

@LynnieThePoohBear sure :)
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LynnieThePoohBear

@NerdyGirl174 you're welcome!
            And thank you! It's a nickname haha.
            And actually, your book is already in my library xD. Would you mind checking out my book, as well, Say the Word? (:
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