Hey! I just read the first chapter of RE: write, and so far so good! I like how you added the email media, but you might want to make it a little more formal/serious? Another pointer would be to include the descriptions of your characters in a separate chapter or at the end of the chapter, because it can get a little confusing. Lastly, you can try to make a book cover that represents your book to make it look more appealing! There are some users on wattpad that offer to make covers for you for free, if you're not able to make them yourself.