Agent_ramirez
This is DAMM GOOD BOOK
murashirou
Hey bro, i can't read your new chapter
Lyrical_19
@murashirou yeah, I accidentally hit publish instead of save when I was writing the chapter. It'll be out soon though, don't worry
GabeWoodward0
Amazing story so far! Definitely try putting the POV in a more first person perspective. Might make it flow a little easier when doing POV Swaps.
Lyrical_19
@GabeWoodward0 I'm glad you are enjoying the story! I'll try my best to keep your advice in mind when writing. I hope you enjoy what is to come, though!