LyricsInColor

To Readers,
          I don't know if anyone is reading this but can you leave me some feedback about my story. Thank you for your time.
          Sincerely,
          Me

To Readers,
          Thank you for reading my book so far  but I would like ask for some feed back on my story on whether it's good or bad or anything like that. Also if you can tell me if it's confusing in certain and if so tell me which ones so I may fix them.
          Thank You For Your Time,
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