Lyunoh

Made a couple more corrections to the dates. Hopefully that is the last one, so the story lines up! LOL

Lyunoh

ok. I have published The Haunted House Journals Of Sarah Book 1. I just now made a few changes, because it originally had a different timeline and was not in Salem. However, before I published it, I changed the timeline and location, but there were still a few spots that hadn't been changed. I changed those and will change others if I find them!

sonember804

That makes total sense! It really grounds the story and makes Sarah feel like a real person, not just a horror victim. Apart from that I loved how easy it was to get invested in your story. The characters felt genuine, and several scenes were so visually striking that they instantly gave me ideas for illustrations.

Lyunoh

@sonember804 thank you so much for the kind words. Hopefully when I get book 2 finished with editing, you'll like it as much.
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