I am a high school student who loves writing and wants to get more constructive criticism. Most of my friends are too nice or busy to do it, which is part of why I'm publishing on here.
Please note, however, that I am not an experienced writer. Though I try to keep my writing as error free as possible, if you're looking for something super high quality, this is not the place to find that. Actually, if that's what you're looking for, you probably shouldn't be searching on a site literally anyone can post on. 

I'm a Christian

Everything I write is clean.