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Also u might wanna use the classics of finding the other one visually attractive or nice to be around or having a beautiful voice or whatever it is. Just try to see it through their eyes. Idk if that helps  and try to go with their senses! Like touching or not touching and so on... bringing the heartbeat ir breathlessness in is sometimes nice too. 

@ Kisame-Is-Zaddy  uhh that's not too easy to answer. Try to he descriptive. Dont have them talk too much but also go with thoughts and mimic. It can be cheesy if written well people dont mind  try to stop the story flow while they do so the focus is really on them. 

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@ Lostgirly19  bin sehr gespannt:D

@TokyoTinax3 also thank you for seeing the chapter number mistake ofc its ch 5 XD

@TokyoTinax3 the entire story was published already more than a year ago. however i wasn't happy about it so i unpublished it. This now is like a version 2 with some changes especially regarding the end therefore im also happy for input :)

@ TokyoTinax3  wait the one u updated right now isn't it part 5? And why is there a comment of June 2019