@M855A1
in your book, is the quote:
"O Universe tremble, for mother earth has birthed an unforgiving force. And it looks upon you wanting."
from a YT vid?
In your story, how intelligence the people of Aurora 277 in your story will be? I ask because a lot of Isekai stories especially reskin Gate ficts make the natives dumb as chowder.
It would be more interesting that the natives and magical beings in your story are not only smart but also pragmatic when it comes to dealing with interstellar forces. It also would be more interesting that powerful magical beings would seek to expand their domain beyond their world since they would obviously hate to be outdone by magicless beings who conquer the Stars or even downright unmake an entire planet without any ounce of magic.
Magics that can vaporize mountains are scary but nothing is more scary than space warships that drop multiple super megaton nukes to devastate a planet
@KennyWeebKun maybe. I have thought of making it more realistic, aka r3educing the military power and instead following the real life plans. it's just that i would add a competent president. Or, i could make it alternate history.
I'll try it I could write again, there's a lot of reasons I didn't continue it anymore. Recently there has been an explosion of cringe Philippines fictions, where the authors are kind of more than nationalistic and making their own country insanely OP. I might be mistaken as one of those, but before then I have gathered a lot of ideas from both Atlantia in another world and P.H.I.