MADelmare

@MADelmare okay! Thank you so much I will work on it

I can’t finish it right now but so far it has a lot of potential. As of right now I feel as if needs a little more detail. More on her feelings, on how she took out the head warrior, how people look and on their encounters and backstory. But I only got to the first 2 chapters so so far it’s really good! Just work on that a little bit

Definitely!

Thanks for the follow too!

Thanks hun it’s a really good book. I was really disappointed last night because I found it really late and wasn’t able to continue reading before u started to fall asleep