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Thank you very much for following me, it's great to connect with yet another person on here. :) Your works all seem very interesting, and I will definitely be reading them. 
          
          ps. Feel free to shoot me a PM at any time. I'm always up for conversations!

Thanks for fanning me, it is great encouragement coming from you, who writes so vividly!

Thanks for fanning, it means a lot to me!

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          Thank you for the fan love and thank you for all the kind words and time you've taken to help understand things along the way. : )
          
          "Drago"

Oh, and don't forget that I won't get the message unless it says "@MommyMagic" in the message.  Just hit that reply button on the bottom right of the box and it'll show right up- no problems.  Otherwise, I'm clueless that you've replied to my message!

@Silently I tend to agree.  Even Ali said that the beginning 'had legs.'  And short stories tend to be overlooked for the Watty's.  Not REAL stories with beginnings, middles & ends with a good twist thrown in.  Last year's short story winner was a trip down suicide lane- no real conflict- and the twist was that her lover killed himself, too.  It wasn't BAD . . . truly it wasn't.  But I can see this growing into something amazing.  
          
          As for a title . . . 
          
          Digital Cloud
          Computing the Afterlife
          Digital Haunting
          Downloaded Personalities (yuck- no.  Maybe not)
          Stalking from the Cloud
          Do digital personalities dream of electric sheep (lol  Just kidding)

I thought about "ghost in the machine" for a title but it's well-used, back to Descartes for a definition of soul. I want to use 'cloud' in the title, as in computing and heaven...  As for submitting to Watty? For seriously real reasons, I would need an editor to help me craft a good story with this electronic ghost idea. (I don't facebook/tweet)

Been thinking of that post- the ghost in the machine? You know, that would be a stellar beginning for something . . . more- short story or novel.  It's all set up- right there, at the beginning.  And if you decided to lean more towards short story, you could enter it into Watty's.  The deadline's Oct 31.  
          
          Come on.  It's a really original idea.  Consider developing it?

Thanks for the reciprocal fanning.  If you get around to reading something, I know your comments will be thoughtful ones.  If you don't, that's all good, too.  Cya round the pad!

@Silently I've got a writing assignment due in 6 days.  It pays, so I'll be busy with research and boring non-fiction. The few MS files for stories I have (mostly still in rough outline and notes) will be on hold for a few days.