slyfox23456

thanks for voting
          

slyfox23456

@slyfox23456  you can say those but just dm me
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MC_Macazerzz

@slyfox23456 it's not mistakes it's just sometimes it jumps too much from scene to seen, or description to speech without everything said, once again I love your writing but they are the only things that I can think of to make it better
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slyfox23456

@slyfox23456 thanks warn me about mistakes
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xShandilyax

Hey thanks a lot for all the votes!

xShandilyax

@MC_Macazerzz thanks a lot.......
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MC_Macazerzz

@bookbreath they are good books 
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Dark_Fantasy_Wolf

Hi, thank you so much for voting on Adelaide, I hope you continue to enjoy it! Have a nice day 

MC_Macazerzz

@Dark_Fantasy_Wolf  no problem, i read and vote and commment on  brilliant books, i should make a public library to show off the brilliant authors just like yourself but i just done get round to it 
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