@MCassiday
You're welocme!
My email is eviethebookworm@hotmail.co.nz
Right now I am editing two other stories, so it may be a while for me to get back to you. If you're still keen then just email me.
Hello, I saw your discussion in the 'Improve My Writing' club.
I am willing to edit your story.
Would you like me to PM my email address to you?
Happy Wattpading (: