Hi :)
Firstly wanted to say your writing style is quite captivating, loved reading it although i wasn't very Happy with the plot i still liked the way you write.
I wasn't happy the way how Percy's story ended, but i know it's your story and you have all the rights to write it however you want, saying that I felt disappointed because I was rooting for Percy, i know you were trying to write out of the stereotype, i get it but i just wish there was a blurb more put together that gave an Idea that there's a third person in the story, as you told in AN that it's not only Percy and Max's story but also of Gabe's and Max's but the blurb didn't show or gave any idea that it's a sort of love triangle, i don't like reading love triangles especially in werewolf genre, even while reading the story it's not untill you are half way invested in the story that you find that couple you are rooting for isn't the endgame, (heck the name of the story suggest otherwise), it felt like a clickbait tbh. The reason I love werewolf litrature is because of the exclusivity of the main Mc and Fc, so i was highly disappointed, as Percy's character did had lots of potential, his relationship with his dad, you could have shown how he redeemed himself and became a better mate, he did had layers to his character, he was secretive, manipulative, burdened because of his dad, on the other hand Gabe was straightforward, (and boring?) but again it's YOUR story and you are free to write whatever way you want, just like I'm free to enjoy a good old traditional werewolf no matter how toxic it can be, because at the end of the day it's just fiction.
Anyways, Good luck for future writings.
Peace :)