MJBlackKnights
Hello, my lovelies! I have a question for you all, would you buy my books if they were available as physical copies?
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Hello, my lovelies! I have a question for you all, would you buy my books if they were available as physical copies?
Hello, my lovelies! I have a question for you all, would you buy my books if they were available as physical copies?
I AM OBSESSED WITH THE PRICE OF DESIRE I NEED MORE!!!!! You are a great writer!!
In all honesty I don’t have a favorite part because I love it all but if I had to choose the spicy scenes or when Gany called Romeo and the mystery behind that!!!
@anonymouswriter73007, I’m so happy you’re enjoying the book! Don’t worry, new chapters are coming soon. Do you have a favorite part so far?
Hey my darlings,
I’m working on new chapters for all of my books, especially Price of Desire, because apparently that one has decided to be the favourite right now and I am very aware of it.
I’m sorry I haven’t been posting as quickly as I normally do. Writer’s block has been bullying me a little, and with UNI keeping me busy over the next few months, updates might be a bit all over the place.
Thank you so much for being patient with me and for still being here, reading, supporting, and loving these books. It really means so much to me, and I hope you’re all still enjoying them.
OMG I need so much more sig!!
@reading9993, As a writer, that is one of the largest compliments I can ever receive thank you very much! ❤️ I'm gonna keep on writing. I hope you keep on reading. :)
@MJBlackKnights living for all of your books. My ADHD brain can focus when I read your work. Hooks me and keeps me!!
@reading9993, I got it, Captain. I’ll get to work on it. I hope you’re enjoying the book! Honestly, Sig is a very interesting character, and Wyatt is too. Their whole dynamic is incredibly interesting...
Hi my loves, quick update for The Price of Desire: I’m working on the upcoming chapters and I’ll be posting as soon as possible. It’s been a chaotic week, but I’m back in it and I can’t wait to share what’s next.
Also… maybe grab your emotional support pillow (or a stuffed animal). Just saying.
Oh no, please tell me, that nothing bad happens to everyone we care about!! (severely hoping)
I knew it.!!! all those peaceful chapters were the calm before the storm...
Hello, my darling! sorry for the delay on The Price of Desire, Shattered Memories Unbreakable Desire.
A lot has been going on behind the scenes, and I didn’t want to promise dates I couldn’t keep. But the good news is: I’m also putting together a book tracker for you all, so nobody gets confused with how many books are in the series (because… yeah, there are a lot ).
Thank you for being patient with me and for sticking around. I’ll update you again as soon as I can.
⚠️ Two brand-new chapters of The Price of Desire are dropping soon!! I bless you all for what is about to occur… lol
@MJBlackKnights any feedback would be helpful , mostly the kind that you'd feel as a reader, as you go through the story.. things you or not like about he character or pacing and generally the story
Hi do check out my story veins of iron. It's a slow burn romance with fantasy and politics. I'm a new writer and would love to get your feedback!!
Would you be interested in v4v or r4r.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/395969747?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Tinaw82
@Tinaw82, I really think Jian and Gui Lan are strong additions to the story. Their chapters bring a lot of atmosphere, tension, and depth, and they make a strong impression as readers move through the book. The only thing I would keep an eye on is balance, because their scenes are so intense and memorable that they naturally draw a lot of attention. They are not overtaking the story yet, but I do think it would help to be mindful of how much page time they get, just to make sure they continue enhancing the main plot without pulling too much focus away from it.
@Tinaw82, You did a great job making the story feel atmospheric and interesting. The setting stands out, and the relationship between Meiyu and Xu Ren is one of the best parts. Meiyu feels smart, capable, and easy to root for, which makes the story even more engaging. The main thing to improve is the pacing. In some places, the emotional reactions and inner thoughts feel repetitive, so the story slows down more than necessary. Some scenes could be tightened by cutting repeated feelings and moving to the next important moment faster. Each scene should clearly add something new, whether a clue in the mystery, a shift in trust, or new tension in their relationship. The chemistry could grow if there were more moments of conflict, pressure, or emotional vulnerability, so it does not rely only on quiet attraction and flustered reactions. Adding more variety in how they connect would make their relationship feel deeper and more memorable. Overall, though, the story already has many strong points. The atmosphere, the slow-burning tension, and the mystery are all working well, and it definitely feels like a story with a lot of potential. ❤️
@MJBlackKnights this is great , thankyou I'll keep in mind on the repeatedness.. also by the way what did you think about Jian and Gui lan in the latest chapters? Do you think their taking up too much of the limelight?
⚠️ This series will roll out slowly. I’m currently focusing on finishing my remaining projects so I can give these books the attention they deserve.
The Masked Men of Everfall Series
Genre: Dark Romance University
Setting: A university in Ireland
This series follows two interconnected friend groups from different communities. It’s dark, chaotic, absolutely hilarious, and packed with chemistry.
The Unseen Series
Off Camera
Genre: University Romance, MxMxM
Setting: A university in Australia
This universe is massive and continues expanding. It features a wide range of characters and interconnected stories, with many future books planned within the same world.
Rolling in the Dust Series
My New Home (Book Two)
This story unfolds in intentional arcs, exploring friendship, identity, and emotional growth. As the characters navigate their pasts and form new relationships, they evolve individually and together. At its core, the series highlights the lasting impact of connection and the journey of becoming who you’re meant to be.
Guardians of 109 Series (Not Released Yet)
This series will not be released until My New Home is either fully completed or at least halfway finished.
I’m especially excited about this one, the covers are some of my personal favorites. I had so much fun creating them, and the imagery truly brings this series to life.
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