MJSOFTCORE

@Offthewallbby if you're available, I'm kinda dying to know what you think of my new chapter of RTT
          	

Offthewallbby

As soon as I get some time, I’m looking forward to diving back into your story.
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MJSOFTCORE

@Offthewallbby if you're available, I'm kinda dying to know what you think of my new chapter of RTT
          

Offthewallbby

As soon as I get some time, I’m looking forward to diving back into your story.
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MJSOFTCORE

Okay, important question guys, especially for my dear writer friend @Offthewallbby, for Thriller Tonight, should I drop a vignette about the lore as to how Michael got the wolf curse and how he feels about it concerning his religious guilt and internal self disgust, or should I just move on picking up on what Ola does after their theme park date? I am genuinely conflicted about whether I should do the lore drop before or after :/

MJSOFTCORE

@Offthewallbby Ohh, thanks. Because I wanted to find a way to touch on his religious guilt and self loathing naturally, but I think maybe I'll wait until later on to bring it up because it's not really needed yet, now that I think about it. Thanks for the advice! 
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Offthewallbby

I think it really comes down to how essential it is to the story as a whole. From what I’ve read so far, I never found myself questioning how he became a wolf. Some stories don’t need to explain every origin to be effective. Not every character requires a full backstory to feel complete. That said, if you’re looking to add more dimension, it could absolutely work. Rather than laying it all out plainly, you might offer fragments of his past, moments that surface when something in the present triggers him. Those triggers could open the door to brief  flashbacks, revealing what happened to him and how he became a shapeshifter.
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michaeljacksonsofine

@MJSOFTCORE maybe on the date he has flashbacks and the lore is shown in those memories????
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