Hey bro,
Listen, you’ve written an amazing story, I really loved it. I got so immersed in this story, like drowning in the depths of the ocean. Honestly, I liked Zeru’s character the most – when Kai was being insulted, Zeru said, “Don’t listen to them.” That’s truly an awesome line in this story.
Just like you showed Kai’s adventure, I’ve also written a story. If you read my story and tell me how it is, I’ll be really happy. So please do read it – _Rise of Devil Corporation.
https://www.wattpad.com/user/bizarrestale