MON16may

☁️ CLOUD AND RAIN: Always With You ️
          	
          	What happens when the person you love forgets you…
          	but you remember everything?
          	
          	Hi, I’m a new writer and also my first bl story,who loves creating emotional BL/LGBT stories filled with romance, mystery, heartbreak, and second chances.
          	This is my first story, and I’m excited to finally share it 
          	✨ Reincarnation
          	✨ Fake dating
          	✨ Forgotten memories
          	✨ Emotional romance.
          	I really hope you guys like it.
          	Read and enjoy, there are more parts coming...️‍

onyxonly1917

@MON16may Hey there I saw u follow me on Instagram..... Yeah I'll give your novel a go and give ya a feedback ✨
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onyxonly1917

I'll read more of your chapters later on but one thing I would like to suggest is that try describing things more. It would really help your writing to improve

MON16may

@onyxonly1917 ok thanks
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onyxonly1917

@onyxonly1917 You can try checking out my new ffs or I can suggest you some authors who are really good at writing. 
            
            You can check out " The First Omega" By soso 
            
            And " Glowbound" By Raincoffiee 
            
            Or " His Rescued One " ( writers name is long I ain't remember sorry) 
            
            " My professor Husband " By sofialouis
            
            " His choosen Bride" By sumeri 
            
            You can try seeing the writing patterns of their story analyze them. Even I did the same to learn. ✨
            
            Hoping to see you improve ❤
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MON16may

@onyxonly1917 thank you, I will try my best.
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MON16may

☁️ CLOUD AND RAIN: Always With You ️
          
          What happens when the person you love forgets you…
          but you remember everything?
          
          Hi, I’m a new writer and also my first bl story,who loves creating emotional BL/LGBT stories filled with romance, mystery, heartbreak, and second chances.
          This is my first story, and I’m excited to finally share it 
          ✨ Reincarnation
          ✨ Fake dating
          ✨ Forgotten memories
          ✨ Emotional romance.
          I really hope you guys like it.
          Read and enjoy, there are more parts coming...️‍

onyxonly1917

@MON16may Hey there I saw u follow me on Instagram..... Yeah I'll give your novel a go and give ya a feedback ✨
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