Hunterprime1414
You still okay?
Hunterprime1414
You still alive ?
Hunterprime1414
So new idea for a king's ransom: Other pirates try to steal Antonio so that they get the ransom money instead.
Hunterprime1414
@MRisak again, I'm I'm imagining the look on Esmerelda's face when she finds out angie is his sister and not his ladyfriend.
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MRisak
He’s actually wearing clothes that Marco and Ira gave him before the boat ride, sorry if you were imagining him in his underwear the whole time
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Hunterprime1414
@MRisak plus, I can't wait to read the look on Esmerelda's face when she finds out angie is his sister and not his ladyfriend. Akward.
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Hunterprime1414
Please update a king's ransom
MRisak
@Hunterprime1414 thank you for the idea's and your patience, I promise to make sure the next chapters are to your liking :)
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Hunterprime1414
@MRisak I'm sorry for bugging you. I just love the story so much. Also, I have some ideas and requests for the story: •request: I noticed that when Antonio woke up while tied up, he was in only his "undies". I'm not saying dress him up fully, but at least get him some pants. •idea: Antonio tells the crew the truth about not loving his fiance and about his sister. Then Esmerelda will begin to understand why his fiance isn't coming and why the ring is important to him.
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MRisak
@Hunterprime1414 Sorry for the wait, but school has been rough lately so it's gonna be a while until the next chapter, again, I apologize
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Hunterprime1414
For a king's ransom, I just realized something. Since Antonio and Angela's ring came from their mothers side and it is seen as worthless to most people, I theorize that Antonio's mother came from a poor family.
Hunterprime1414
For your kings ransom story, I'd like to see a chapter with the point of view of Antonio's father or fiance. How are they reacting to Antonio missing?