Hi @MSMFan ! I just finished reading Time Force: The Rise of Dr. Octavius Brine and I have to say, I’m completely captivated. The way you described the serene morning in the living quarters contrasted with the high stakes urgency of the mission made the characters world feel so alive and immersive. I especially loved the moments showing the team’s camaraderie Margo and Antonio’s quiet, mutual understanding and Sherman and Penny’s playful yet brilliant collaboration it made their bond feel both heartfelt and cinematic. Your writing style is incredibly vivid, full of emotional depth and rich detail that really draws the reader in. I’m a professional visual artist, and I take paid commissions transforming stories into visually stunning art. Reading your chapter, I could immediately imagine it as a dynamic, emotional comic full of atmosphere and memorable visuals. If you’re ever open to a visual adaptation someday, I’d love to bring your story to life.