I love the changes you have made. I feel more invested in the characters and looking forward to the new chapter 3. Just wish I could give another star for the rewrites. I liked your story before but this is better. Would love your insight on my story if you get the chance. I'm starting to see mine as a rough draft for now and may choose to flesh it out with more details later. I'm hoping for a more novel like feel but haven't figured out what I am missing yet. I guess as long as we are enjoying what we are doing, we are doing something right. I'll be checking occasionally for your next chapter!
