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Okokok it took me some time but how making Zen (protagonist) have a connection with a tree that Zeldek peed (emoji of laughter face) yes it sounds funny but what would happen that thanks to Zeldek peeing the tree, it mutated and little by little it started to have small fragments of Eiwa? And maybe Zen can make a connection to his home! What do you think?
Excuse me, but when are you going to update mh×avatar world? You haven't updated since 2022 *crying emoji face* The story is incredible and amazing.
@RominaCedeno9 oki doki. Maybe tomorrow I am gonna put on the board some ideas that catch your interest. Now I am tired and want to sleep so goodnight
@RominaCedeno9 Do you have any suggestions? I might look back on this story if I get some neat recommendations on where the story should go. Lol, let me know what you think.
Hello everyone. I've just sent out some updates on the Lookism fanfic as well as the anime Given fanfic. If you're interested, I'd love you for days if you'd go check them out. I'll be writing a lot more in the next few days as well. Stay alert for any new updates that come your way. ;)
Hey menzie this just clicked in my head how do you do the Navi language like did you just make all of it up and used some of it that was used in the movies or is there an actual like Navi dictionary?
@Shadowghoul19692 The language I used were syllable references from the movies. But mostly just made up. I used the different sounding syllables to best to imitate different scenes with emotion coming off of the way they are pronounced rather than the actual understanding of the phrase itself. Laving it up to readers to make their own perspective on their replies through guessing out the reactions of the navi oc, and it's exclamation, on the nose delivery.
Hey menzie how have you been? I hope your doing well and still having that drive to be author cause I read a few of your stories and I must say they are top notch Like seriously they are you have amazing work I was hoping if you can make more chapters for Na’vi reader x mha? Or the mha x oc and I have been meaning to ask how did you manage to make multiple stories and how or what did you do to make a story?
@Shadowghoul19692 Also, after re-reading your longer entry above. I think that often times, over-describing can lose the interest of people when reading those crucial fight scenes. So make it simple, impactful and down to the point when your in those quick actioned scenes, or more so specifically add details to the slow-mo effect, and add things like smell, touch, heated tones of stress, or coldness for the somber effect. Even such words that can outwards portray the emotions of a character's feelings at the atmosphere. Then the contrast can be something to also note to their environment compared to their inner monologue... Such as the unexpected rise of a genuine hero even if faintly portrayed outwards and doubtful to be that hero from his exterior.(Izuku Midoriya) So, symbolism too can be added. Evergreen, never disheartened to defeat the enemy. Or like Katsuki's Bakugo. His prowess is concealing his inner turmoil of explosive confusion. Whether to be ignited to prove his worth as superior towards Midoriya, or used that inferiority complex to further ignite his drive to protect his childhood friend near season 6 once a mutual understanding and type of 'mending' of their relationship has been established. Things to consider.
@Shadowghoul19692 That said, I believe if you work hard on the thoughts brought behind your words, and how you utilize those choices in perspective that your writing with connect on a much more emotional level to your readers. Something a bit more wholesomely honest, and easy to convey for the beginning, but by all means you could definitely make the ending complex or even the middle into a thriller type of novel. Even for anime's and manga, even movie series, emotions have a big form factor in making your writing pieces memorable. But then again it's complicated to explain how to properly do this. Since it's most often just practice when writing, and your own tastes when organizing your ideas. Hope this helped. And I'll try to add some more work's in my spare time. Thanks for your questions, always glad to help. <3
@Shadowghoul19692 Hey, there.. Well to stat off, for the story ideas. I've honestly used imagery as a foundation. Using platforms like Pinterest and gaining the imagery of what sort of story I want to convey with simple ideas and then further elaborating them onto a listing system. So for example, my avatar x mha fanfiction. I browsed both images of both fiction sources. Such as Jake sully, and fanart, on top of fanart and ideologies of the mha characters for how they could interconnect and what their tones, atmosphere and story telling script would sound like or at least resemble. I think if you'd connect the imagery of the themes together in smart ways such as the training of a son(Endeavor towards his kids, specifically Shoto Todoroki), and Jake Sully's training under the navi culture. Both different in world's but similar in hardships and willpower to achieve, for Jake the trust and embodiment of what it means to be a navi, also represented with my OC Zen, and for Shoto the same can be said for his path to becoming a hero. Zen lost his family, while Shoto and other character's are also struggling within their chaotically dystopian world of quirks. Zen offer's them the stability while the world of mha has literally brought instability to his life as well. Those sorts of deep analysis' are necessary to convey and portray a good story foundation.
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@MenzieShane0423 Yeah the He said part doesn’t really flow with me as well Thanks a lot Gosh I’m blushing
@isaacackerman101 So thanks for all of the votes too. I should be the one thanking all of my readers for the support and their views on my stories. Let me know if you'd like any specific type of fics, and I'll see what I can do in my spare time. ^^