MSumner

You're a Whedonite? Me too! high five! *high fives you*
          Awesome!

no problem! your short story looks good too!

I've edited Parts 3 & 4 a bit. A small character edition kind of changes things :)

@BlackCherryGlass Well yeah, and by Whedonite I mean a huge fan of the TV shows and movies of Joss Whedon. Therefore I'm a huge fan of vampire stories, and I just checked Sova Vampires out, it seems really interesting :)

Whedonite???  Are you allowed to read vampire stories??  If so, try SOVA VAMPIRES.  #37 right now!  You comment swap??
          Peace, BCG