Bilalmray

Why the hack did you publish your whole story in one chapter \ (- _ -.) /
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MT-anime

@Bilalmray 
            Well, it hurts. I love female characters in almost everything.
            And in my stories generally, gender doesn't matter. If you read a little, you will understand what I mean.
            And I find a little lazy option. I mean, you can't fix everything with magic. You cannot break the system or the laws that you set. The reader will notice that this attempt to cover up is wrong. The easiest is not to make a mistake from the beginning.
            And at least you can read that first chapter of my new story, and tell me what you think.
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Bilalmray

@ Bilalmray 
            Yeah I noticed that, personaly I don’t like the domination of female characters in  novels it's kinda annoying that it's the trend of this decade, so I intend to make more male characters than female ones.
            This is my first time writing a novel so I chose a magical since it's the easiest at building, plus If I get stuck in the story with a terrible mistake in its plot I can always fix it with magic.
            
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MT-anime

@Bilalmray 
            I don't think that part of this "short story" makes sense. Most importantly, write the best you can from the start. I mean to start the story with a strong event, which sparks the reader's curiosity about what comes next. Then, find a way to promote your novel. Maybe post in groups or ask a famous content creator to help you.
            I don't think the lengthy introduction to the plot is positive either. Instead, it's about unraveling the mystery of that world slowly with the turn of events, or at least making the side events look impressive.
            I wouldn't say that this happens to me a lot, since I don't have readers, but in my GEO-Chan story, I made a lot of the characters girls, so... I think it's easy to misunderstand, even though there's basically no romance going on.
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Bilalmray

Hi, I love your work
          I happen to be writing my own story too, so I'd like you to drop by and maybe give an expression if you please, thanks in advance. 

Bilalmray

@ Bilalmray 
            You can't publish your fb link here
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MT-anime

@Bilalmray 
            I wouldn't say it's a misunderstanding. I asked hoping it would be so that it would be easier for us to communicate.
            It is also a good opportunity. This is the first time I have spoken to a non-Arab. It is also nice to be a Muslim.
            If you say so, bring the link to that story here so I can see.
            You know, I'm a slow reader. I do not answer messages quickly. I mean, you already see that I haven't opened this account in a month or so.
            to get to know?
            This is my Facebook account link. I think continuing the discussion there will be easier for both of us.
            https://web.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100084988650581
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Bilalmray

@ Bilalmray  huh I get this misunderstanding a lot, you see I'm muslim my father named me bilal but I'm not arab, I'm from Canada, I speak arabic though but don't expect a lot, my story doesn't have that advanced vocabulary so I think it might be easy for you to understand, you're good at english btw, I've only noticed some mere mistakes.
            
            So if you like to, we might co-write a story if you'd like to. 
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