MUHATTI

          	
          	Honestly, I'm feeling a bit stuck. I'm starting to think that my book isn't making sense, and I'd love your feedback

Pen_abdull

@MUHATTI Not really, no. Is it any good?
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Pen_abdull

@MUHATTI It's natural for you to get stuck when writing a book, especially if it's your first. My advice? take a break from writing, read other books (a book or two) related to your genre for inspiration, then come back to your work with a fresh mind and start writing down anything that comes to mind, forget about editing it until you are done putting your ideas down. 
          	  If you can get a fresh pair of eyes to help you with constructive criticism and brainstorm ideas, that would be good. I find this approach helpful.
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mrs_armaaan

@MUHATTI it is can't wait for you to update dont give up girl
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Liandany732

Hello! Sorry to comment on your message board without permission. If you’re into mafia stories but want something fresh, try this:
          
          Meet the Firdaus family. You’ll either want to hug them or run.
          
          An Arab mafia family. Brothers who’d die for each other (or kill each other). Wives who keep them in line. Kids who refuse to stay out of trouble.
          
          The Heirs of Honour is packed with drama, action, and a surprising amount of humor.
          
          Warning: once you meet them, you won’t leave.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/357783434?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=yasha1021

fellowmuslimah

Hi. Good day. This is an Arewa Islamic-based YA novel, and it would mean the world to her if you could check it out. She updates daily as well. She needs constructive criticism so feel free to comment your thoughts. Have a nice day!!! 
          A follow will be appreciated
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/393751430?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ABB_writesfiction

Royalty_Reserved

❝ I Had Closed off all avenues to Your grace,
          But then, I found myself at her doorstep, seeking solace and pace.
          And what an astonishment that You made her to heal and renew,
          So with gentle care, she led me back to You. ❞
          
          Salam! If you get time, check it out! You never know, you may find yourself adhering to it! 
          
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          If you’re interested in historical fiction, this shall, God Willingly, certainly satisfy your thirst! 
          
          ❝ In Which The Dignified Scholar Was Lured Into The Darkness By The Devil Only To Be Moulded Into A Monsterous Killer ❞
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376230697?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Royalty_Reserved
          

MUHATTI

Please check out my book too
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MUHATTI

@Royalty_Reserved inshallah I would read it
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Bong-o-girl

Hi, let's grow together! Vote for vote genuine read for read, follow for follow. If u have insta follow me I will follow back. Read and vote for my story please please please! I am a new writer, support me please!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/119746829-the-other-half

MUHATTI

@Bong-o-girl I would love to,let's grow together I will add it to my library and read it inshallah 
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MysticMelodywrites

Hi there dear author...
          
          Start a new fantasy story with a new writer. A new book in the world of imagination. Make ur imagination and butterflies go wild with our lead characters CONAN & LUNA...
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          He fell first but she fell harder...❤
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          He wants to heal her but will He end up healing himself...❤
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          CONAN
          Touch her and I will give her a lighter to  let her burn you herself...
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          LUNA
          He is the light in my darkness, without him I am lost..
          
          Can u pls vote and follow I will do the same??

MUHATTI

@MysticMelodywrites seems like a great story I will check it out inshallah 
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MUHATTI

          
          Honestly, I'm feeling a bit stuck. I'm starting to think that my book isn't making sense, and I'd love your feedback

Pen_abdull

@MUHATTI Not really, no. Is it any good?
Reply

Pen_abdull

@MUHATTI It's natural for you to get stuck when writing a book, especially if it's your first. My advice? take a break from writing, read other books (a book or two) related to your genre for inspiration, then come back to your work with a fresh mind and start writing down anything that comes to mind, forget about editing it until you are done putting your ideas down. 
            If you can get a fresh pair of eyes to help you with constructive criticism and brainstorm ideas, that would be good. I find this approach helpful.
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mrs_armaaan

@MUHATTI it is can't wait for you to update dont give up girl
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