RandomUserArandomguy
Lol, my new story's first chapter just got released and you're already there to like it!
Thanks for the follow, and, tell me if you don't mind: What did you think of Story 2? Perhaps anything you liked more than in any other fanfiction, and perhaps anything you didn't like?
Just curious to know because only Story 2 is finished, and is a quite original idea as no one tried doing what i did there.
RandomUserArandomguy
@ MVPRANDOM thanks for the feedback! Just tryna see how many people have to say positive things, and how many people could provide constructive criticism!
I hope you liked the worldbuilding, (bringing the fandom into the storu) as one of my followers said its a first-idea, and im proud of it.
I'll call it "Outsider in The Narrative" trope.
MVPRANDOM
@RandomUserArandomguy Ye, so happens I was reading and saw the notification!Personally Story 2 was pretty well write and explained episode 3 (In the beginning) better and was understandable!The thing that made me like about then any other fan fiction was the way Ogla acted towards Uzi at first!I don't have any disliking to it uhm, it's probably me being biased and stuff.
