@qualityfanfiction WoW. That was FANTASTIC! For only reading two chapters I can already tell that when it gets updated, and I receive that notification I will DEFINITELY be reading it. One thing that I really liked was the detail. You had just the right amount. Not to much, not to little. Also, your chapters weren't all song lyrics like some of the other books that I've read. Even though you included some you didn't have the entire song in there. Also, there wasn't any spelling or grammar mistakes that I found. I like that. It shows that you take pride in your work, and want it to be great. That's good. That is how I know that it's going to be a great book. Continue with it, and don't give up on it. It's gonna be great.
