M_M_Yoshida

FINALLY The latest chapter of Demon's Travels: Winter is up. I kept on writing and rewriting and redoing this chapter over and over cause it was such an important one to Mira's character development so it ended up taking over a month. But please enjoy.

M_M_Yoshida

FINALLY The latest chapter of Demon's Travels: Winter is up. I kept on writing and rewriting and redoing this chapter over and over cause it was such an important one to Mira's character development so it ended up taking over a month. But please enjoy.

M_M_Yoshida

You all like isekais? What if you were reincarnated as a Kaiju!? Check out "Please Don't Hurt Kaiju-Chan" chapter 1! Out now!!

321gman

Ah, Ghidorah. Always the one causing issues even in writing. Triple the heads, triple the amount of problems that come with it even just trying to write a story with the alien.
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M_M_Yoshida

@SCPdragonking814 No I didn't, stop assuming @321gman that one is currently on hiatus due to difficulties in redoing Ghidorah's lore. That is a fan fiction, but the Kaiju-Chan story is an original work that I plan on getting published one day like The Demon's Travels. Its NOT a fan fiction at all.
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321gman

@M_M_Yoshida what about “That time I got reincarnated as Godzilla” on the other account?
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M_M_Yoshida

Assassins, Modern Magic in America and mysteries, OH MY!   Come check out Monster 7 if you have the chance for a different kind of story altogether as  Lizard beastman Detective Lewinsky puts himself on the trail of the last dragon and the greatest assassin in the world.

M_M_Yoshida

How do people feel about Demon's Travels? 
          I am currently evaluating myself as a writer and I wish to know if they wish for the series to continue.

ShaguftaTariq

Also 
            You could try some gaming nerd ranting
            Or confident (trying to hide fear like spiderman) quips and some pov thinking  jokes like percy jackson to show growth in her confidence. Or literally some balatant overconfident comments to piss a certain goddess 
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ShaguftaTariq

@M_M_Yoshida  you are practically one of the best fanfic writer on wattpad and all other platforms i have read from and from a regular fans point of view this series is amazing. BUT I WANT YOU TO GROW as a Writer and grow to fame so I will give you some KEY FACTs you coud work on
            
            1) you need to work on fight in first person POV in the recent chapter i was getting bored by CONTINUOUSLY reading lines like "I FELT PAIN. I overcame it and used my special move, it was useless against the new monster. Due to regeneration." OR "I jumped,ducked,weaved and attacked which was useless yet i was resilient."
            
            2) The plot twists are becoming apparent like every two chapter or time mira faces death I am like HERE it comes some convenient plot twist to save her life or though the cuthuhulu one was NEW
            3) atleast make one time mira fighting a multichapter battle with a strong monster on equal terms instead of a one side bashing. where sheer determination and Good luck aren't the only key factors
            
            
             
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321gman

@M_M_Yoshida I find the series rather enjoyable. I will not lie and say I do not miss the previous rendition, I rather enjoyed it and was rather disappointed when it was so suddenly cancelled, but you returned with something that is just as good, if not better. However, none can argue that it isn't far more refined and a showing of your skills as a writer. While you do not cover all the same things, in some ways there is good reason not to. Why cover the same exact tedious little things when you can skip over stuff, like you did with much of the schooling and moved on to the professional life and where those experiences are and what stories that shows, granted  that is partially because of the setting and actual time implications of things happening decades later compared to only a few years in the previous rendition but nonetheless it is certainly interesting. You don't just stagnate and become dull, you venture out, try new things. Some work, some don't, such is the way of things with life but both you and the audience learn more about ourselves and each other. I've legitimately sat down and thought "If I was in this, would I have taken Freyvalia's offer at the table?" and its a rather fascinating thought process... one that ended rather  poorly for me... yeah.... Seeing how far one may be willing to go and to sacrifice for others and for themselves as they just try to learn who and what they are, and seek their place in the world. I would think anyone can understand such a story and I for one am certainly interested in the story continuing, almost impatiently due to rather obvious boredom in the last year of being cooped up, checking in at least once a day, if not more to see if you posted a new chapter here or on the main channel, eagerly waiting a continuation of the story that I have spent considerable time and investment in to see its future growth of characters we have to know, laugh at and with, and see where they will continue to go in the future.
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M_M_Yoshida

THIS WEEK is EDITATION week. I will be going through my books from 1 to 3, reevaluating how they've been written. Taking away dumb things like 'info dumps' and trying to hurl as many descriptors in as I can to make the book more captivating to a professional reader. You can take a look afterwords to see if the job was done right XD I'll be doing it chapter by chapter.

Sabrina_The_Tigar

@M_M_Yoshida
            
            Okay. First, I don’t understand why you fear of sounding stupid. I really don’t. That’s not something to fear—at least in my personal opinion.
            
            Second, I guess I shouldn’t said my first comment because I don’t understand how to help you..Sure, I may have helped from time-to-time, but it’s only with small typos. 
            
            I’m really sorry...I shouldn’t ranting on like this.
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Sabrina_The_Tigar

@M_M_Yoshida
            
            Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! Hold up! Hold up!!
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