MaMarshmallow

what's up pals. remember that fic i talked about a while back? well it's finished! if you'd like to check it out, find me on AO3 under the same name MaMarshmallow. shoot me some kudos and comments or let me know what you think on tumblr. bun-squad.tumblr.com stay awesome guys!

MaMarshmallow

GUYS wow it's been a while, hasn't it? Anyway, I'm working on a new fic! Featuring Ashton and a 28 day stay in an underground nuclear fallout shelter. Stay tuned for updates on when I'll start posting and whatnot. As always, bun-squad.tumblr.com for questions or right on here. Hope you guys are all staying rad xox

_GotttaZayn_

Can You Please update Runaway!!!!!! I am obsessed with it and I have already read it twice. thank you!!!!!

MaMarshmallow

@ItTakesHope well howdy! Yeah I should prolly update haha I've had a wild few months so I've unfortunately been neglecting my fic but I will post an epilogue soon!
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MaMarshmallow

I've finished reading the fanfic Psycho Sitter! The author of which is only 15 years old. 
          
          The only criticisms I have are towards the writing style. I was very impressed with the plot though the immaturity and lack of proper grammar show through at some points, I am still very impressed with the story line and concept. 
          
          I don't condone romanticizing Stockholm syndrome but stories like this intrigue me (abduction fics/books are my guilty pleasure). I was drawn in from the get go which is very important. 
          
          I disliked the POV changes to Cassie's mom, brother, harry, zayn, and then third person but they did each clarify some background concepts that I would not have gotten, had the story stayed in just the POV of Cassie. 
          
          The plot twist was very surprising. I will say no more than that! 
          
          The end was pretty abrupt and left a few things hanging but it did tie things together simultaneously. 
          
          All together the story was captivating. This was one of those fics that I would read for hours at a time until I absolutely HAD to walk away!
          
          If you've read Psycho Sitter and you wanna chat about it, send me an ask on tumblr or leave a comment below, I'd love to hear some opinions! Xox

MaMarshmallow

Hello hello! For my next fanfic review I'll be reading Psycho Sitter and it's a Harry Styles fanfic. If you're interested and wanna read along OR you've already read it, come chat with me about it on here or on tumblr. I'll post a review once I'm finished reading it to let you know what I think. Happy reading! xox

MaMarshmallow

Alright guys I've been working on reading the fanfic Aisle Five on Wattpad and it’s a Luke Hemmings fic. I was planning on starting a youtube channel for my fic reviews but alas, my laptop doesn’t like to convert videos properly so I’ll be typing them. Short and sweet so you’re not reading a page of nonsense. 
          
          Anyway, Aisle Five is about a girl, Emma King, who gets trapped over night inside a drug store with Luke and while they’re locked in together, they begin to bond. When they are released, they continue to talk and finally form a relationship.
          
          This fic is aimed more towards girls in their teens (Emma is 17/18) so it was a little immature for my taste but it was a cute love story none the less. The AU isn’t specific just a normal boy and girl type of thing. The other three boys are mentioned but not huge parts.
          
          The chapters are short, usually no less that two pages but no more than four. The plot moves along quickly but seamlessly through the 45 chapters and epilogue. 
          
          I recommend this fic to young girls (15-17). 
          
          I’ll give it a 4 out of 5 stars.
          
          If you’d like to come discuss Aisle Five or you want to recommend me a fic shoot me an ask at bun-squad.tumblr.com or message me on Wattpad at MaMarshmallow (please do not promo your own fic).

MaMarshmallow

hey guys! loads to talk about today! first off, THANK YOU for helping my fic get to 6.3k reads. I was gasping when i saw it! second of all, I wanted to let you guys know that I'll be doing small reviews of fanfics I'm reading. I'll be posting the reviews on here as well as on my tumblr. if you ever wanna chat about certain fics or request ones for me to check out (Please don't self-promo) then shoot me a message on here or tumblr.