Herson Ivan James R. Casono

@AbdelRahmanIslam  I wrote this fanfic way before S4 to pass the quarantine times waiting for the next season so most of the characters are OC.

@Maachij215 I read your story till chapter 3 and well, I have some notes.
            
            1) Your story is composed of a bunch of characters and two main characters. Adrien/ Chat Noir doesn't have any character development at all, he just appeared in one of the scenes.
            
            2) the idea is of the story is good but needs some real miraculous touches, like the fact of Su Han appearing or new heroes.
            
            Yeah, that's all, and that's my personal opinion. I will continue reading later on.

@Maachij215 I will.