Yeah, in the 'Give It Up' book. Point blank here are some things that need to be worked on:
*Capitalization
*Punctuation
*Grammer
*Complete Sentences
and a whole lot more.
But, other than that, the book was absolutely amazing and I especially love the plot. I love Jasper/Bella pairings and this one will most likely stay in my library. Super job, fellow Wattpadian.