Maddie_thespaz_one
Of course! I checked out your book, and I really liked it! It's a very unique concept and I can't wait to see where you go with it! My only thing would be to add just a little more detail on the little things, like not only what places look like, but how those paces influence the characters and how those characters feel about certain things. You're a really good writer and I can't wait to see what you have in store!