the_machi_prince
Hey @Mafiaboss45, I'm still kind of new at this myself, but I'd be happy to help you out, what kind of review were you looking for?
the_machi_prince
oh, yes, sorry, here's my email, machinico051@gmail.com
If you send me a quick email, I can send you the feedback back. Question though. I went through your first chapter and I annotated it with feedback, Do you want that or just the general stuff. I know feedback can be hard to take on so I wanted to ask