Magical_Mikrokosmos

Daughter of the Bat Chapter 5 is published! I hope you enjoy!

Magical_Mikrokosmos

First I am so sorry for the delay on DotB. I went on a little trip with my family and SOMEHOW my laptop got absolutely destroyed while I was out and about. I still have no idea how. I think what happened was one of my little cousins accidently fell on it when they were playing or something. But it was pretty much unfixable so I had to get a new one and pretty much had to rewrite the rewrite (hehe)
          
          Second I'm currently still finishing up but I've made some progress. Chapter 5 will be posted tomorrow and I've decided to post Chapter 6 next weekend to make up for lost time. 
          
          Again sorry for the wait and I hope you guys enjoy.

Magical_Mikrokosmos

Hello everyone! 
          
          Chapter Two for Daughter of the Bat will be published tomorrow!

Magical_Mikrokosmos

@InikaBoy Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I know its kinda weird not having question mark. Before I would do that but ever since my English professor told me you shouldn't add one its been kinda stuck in my head lol (every time I did add one in an essay or story he would take points off so its wired in my brain to not add one) but I'll work on that. 
            
            Thanks again!
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InikaBoy

Just read chapter two of DOTB, so far the premise is pretty solid.  Would recommend and adding a question mark when the characters ask questions but that’s just my opinion.
            
            I know it’s a weird thought but instead of Wallace being pulled out of the rubble I actually thought that it was going to be Emma. Replacing Barbara as O.R.I.C.L.E as a twist?  Just some food for thought
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