Magsado

Urgh. Before I do, I HATE ASKING THIS. I've never done it before and I understand that you hate people asking...
          	
          	Okay, here goes.
          	
          	I have a school project on a gothic narrative. I have posted this narrative on my page. Fellow writer to writer could you check it out and give me some pointers. It always helps to get some new eyes on it!
          	
          	Again, I hate asking this but thank you if you do see it, and I feel so ugh now.
          	
          	Thanks,
          	     Rory 
          	
          	[My name autocorrected to tortilla when I typed it :( ]

Magsado

Urgh. Before I do, I HATE ASKING THIS. I've never done it before and I understand that you hate people asking...
          
          Okay, here goes.
          
          I have a school project on a gothic narrative. I have posted this narrative on my page. Fellow writer to writer could you check it out and give me some pointers. It always helps to get some new eyes on it!
          
          Again, I hate asking this but thank you if you do see it, and I feel so ugh now.
          
          Thanks,
               Rory 
          
          [My name autocorrected to tortilla when I typed it :( ]