MahaLuv

Sure.. Its a good story with only a few grammatical errors! If you are a bigginer then this is very well written! Be yourself, Imagine hard, and have fun! Theses are tips to having a great story! Keep on writing and never give up, even if it seems hard! Nice point of view too! Alost like a pro.
          	                                                                               Bye! <3
          	                                                                            :) B-)

MahaLuv

Sure.. Its a good story with only a few grammatical errors! If you are a bigginer then this is very well written! Be yourself, Imagine hard, and have fun! Theses are tips to having a great story! Keep on writing and never give up, even if it seems hard! Nice point of view too! Alost like a pro.
                                                                                         Bye! <3
                                                                                      :) B-)