@Mahrii
Hello, sorry if these messages annoy you but could you please read my story ‘’heart shaped scratch’’
Comment? /?
Vote or even fan?!!!!
The grammar kinda sucks tho.... just to warn you lol
In return I will read any of your work you ask me to =)
Thanks nicolle1496 xx
hello there :)!
sorry to bother you - i know how annoying some of these advertisements can be:/ so don't fret, i COMPLETELY understand if you don't want to read my story :) but i would greatly appreciate it! :D
so far i have only three uploaded,
1;;; Medony
She's just your ordinary girl who moves into a brand new life where she meets two boys - one a mean jerk and the other a boy with a past but only one catches her heart. As if that isn't overwhelming enough, she comes face to face with the truth about her family, her past, and herself. It's filled with twist, and romance scenes! The beginning isn't the best but as the story goes it becomes much more better :D
2 ;; World War Three - Battle Field Of Love - :)
It's the year 2067 and a normal teenage girl named Echo has to face with the mean regulations of World War Three, but she soon meets a perfect stranger who seems amazing - until she realized hes a solider for the other country and she is faced with life changing decision.
3 ;; I want you to want me (;
It's about a girl who has just woken up from two and a half years of coma. As if fitting back into her life isn't hard enough she has to manage to live with a hot Bad Boy who gets on her nerves way too much. She soon begins to get flashbacks of some one else dreadful past - but soon begins to question herself , if this was her own past? <3
Thank you so much for your time :)
i hope you check out one of my stories!
:D && share some feedback (:
<3 it truly would mean a lot to me [:
Hey everyone.
Old Fans and new, glad your still following,
just thought i should inform you i've set up a website that includes
limited amounts of my work. A few peoms, and hopefully (eventaully) lots of photography, some of which is already up.
But anyways, id really like if you would be willing to give ita look over.
Its a really good site as well, and members to my page are greatly welcomed :)
http://mahrieatsyourguts.webs.com/
@Duke_Benjy: Ahh thankyou very much for saying so. :) Assuming it was my recently worked on story that you have looked at?
I became your fan because I appreciate the ideas put into your works. I don't mind work not written to excellence, I mean, I make mistakes myself, but your work stands out, so that's the reason :) x
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Hey there! I was wondering if you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s three that I need some criticism on:
"A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!" romance/humor
Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelors in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell.
"Life Inside White walls" supernatural / romance
At the tender age of five, she claims to see a man who she called her guardian angel. Now Felicia, sixteen and broken, is trapped in a highly secured mental hospital. What will happen when the angel turns out to be real? And what if this angel wasn’t truly what it seemed?
"Beautiful Beautiful" fantasy/romance/ supernatural
Adora is a Halfling. With the blood of a shifter and witch running through her veins, she finds herself not welcomed in her village. Now on the run, she finds herself in the falling for the shifter Prince who that happens to rule over the Kingdom of the west. Seeing that he's looking for a mate and she has no place to go, what will happen between the two?
It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :)
Thank you
-Silverlove
Your welcome I love reading She didn't believe in Love, until he moved across the road
Thnx. i'm planning on wrriting one or more stories eventually. That's actually how i started writing poems. And thnx for the suggestion. =D
Hey, would you mind checking out my stories and give me some constructive criticism?
Here are summaries.
The Angel or the Bad Boy, which one to pick, Heaven or Hell?
-Mayla Kessinger always had thought that she is an ordinary mundane being. But then an some misfortunate event revealed that all her memories and the normalcy of her life are nothing but lies. The two people closest to her, the sweet and innocent Gabriel Morales and the austictic and menacingly beautiful Lucien Cursrotros are not what they seem. Even the famed bad boy of the town, Dante Angliekai has his own secrets. And as secrets and lies start coming out, Mayla realized that the world she lives in is a illusion. Will she be able to discover the truths about her past and decipher the mystery of the so called illusion?
Listen
-Alex Montoya is the new kid in school. On his first day, the Icey Princess, Sharlyene Santiago hit him with a ball on the forehead. He didn't realize it yet, but he fell in love with her right at first sight. But can the Icey Princess warm up to him or freeze him like the hundred others? What Alex doesn't know is that Icey is Hard of Hearing and knows American Sign Language. But she can read lips. The lips that Alex wants so much to have.
I can't say I love you, but I can punch you in the face.
-They met in seventh grade, then Freshman Year, they parted. Now it is Senior Year and Maleah Agapito came back in Adiel Jaypee Tacadena's life. Adiel can still remember the time that Maleah punched him right in the face when he insulted her and tried to kiss her afterwards. Now that she's back, he doesn't like it when her boyfriend that he didn't know about showed up.
Thanks so much! I really would appreciate it!