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" You took my bullet " Ava mumbles with wide eyes and lips full of pallor. 
          
          " I don't like to owe anything. Just evened the score " Roccon softly says with a chuckle as their sights lock for a second.
          
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          The novel " Bulletproof Couple " is now available on Wattpad! 
          
          Genres:
          
          - Teen Fiction 
          - Humor 
          - Romance
          - Action
          - Thriller
          
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          HOPE YOU VISIT IT !
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/392254549?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=thisusernamistakenis

An honest feedback on my story will be greatly appreciated,,,this is my first ever written bookthere might be grammar issues but l will edit when the story is complete...l also need honest critisms and compliments so l get to lnow areas where l am lacking and my strengths,,,which would help me produce better stories...thank you for following me