Malayhan

Hey, this is my new teen fiction short story i hope you all like it i literally came up with it from the top of my head. It is called dead rose and is about two teenagers who secretly like eachother well jessica has had a crush on harry for like forever but one bet gets harry on the wrong side of jessica unknowingly he likes her to. What will happen next? Please comment your thoughts and feelings on this short story and share with friends and family. I have wrote stories for years as it is a passion but i have never felt like publishing them becaus i felt they were not good enough. people may never see this but i hope some people do as i have put my feelings and thoughts into all of my stories. i like to write short stories other wise i babble to much and keep repeating but hope to make a whole book one day. I would love to have people on that journey to writing a book. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/320549761

Hey this is my first story that i have published. I have wrote so many other stories but none of them are as strong as this one. I spent a year getting this right and i hope i did. It is a short story about domestic abuse. Some people might find it hard and shocking but domestic abuse isnt talked enough about. I hope it catches peoples eyes and keeps you peeled to the book. This is a book that can relate to some part of my life and some of it is made up. But just because i made some of it up doesnt mean it hasnt happened to someone else. I just hope some people find piece in this story even though it is very powerful and moving. Some poeple might find it upsetting. There is alot of strong langueage and abusive talk. If you relate i would like to hear your views of the book. Being a child and watching my dad be abusive to my mum was so hard and the words and arguments i listened to hurt. It will stay with me for the rest of my life and i know there are people out there that can relate to me and this book. The charaters are fictinal and not my families real name's and some of the story is made up and diddnt happen to me or anyone i know. But it could of happened to somone you know. 
          
          I hope you enjoy and i would love to hear some feedback. 
          
          MALAYHAN ilyasm xxxx
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/319730479