Maldita

Hi, I'm just promoting my tagalog story. If you have time, can you read it and give me a proper judgement? Thank you
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/248839462?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MaybelAbutar&wp_originator=6rDTJPwaIj87acZhyzyVw1zmoWPCBokilQ6zMZpnWIE%2BRAnqt1iec%2Fkw5AvctDVqUY7fg%2FDrl6RccKLH1l8xYjZ%2B1Ujz9jiBLZVTi98ijRisgU5IRO9VAWDgPz3mgvW1

Hi there Maldita..ang awkward nung maldita..ehehehehehe...Ilang lunok laway ako bago nagtatype dito ehehehehe may favor sana eh..Alam ko na ang kapal ko na I know already don't mention it na..pero pwede mo bang bigyan ng chance yung story ko yung WHEN SHIT HAPPENS??ahehehehehe thanks I love you too✌❤