Hey Maria~~I like what you're doing and where you're going with "Fractured Soul." Keep it going. You have a great narrative voice. And the story line has great potential so far.
In the same direction, I tought you might like my "Dominance Factor." It's about a young woman who eagerly explores her latent fascination with BDSM though a secret society's role playing. (Yeah that :)
Enjoy. And let me know what you think.
~~Califia
https://www.wattpad.com/story/87854945-dominance-factor
@MalejaT ~~Great, Maria. I have some suggestions for you later as top how to get your story a page-turner, and get it inot the hands of more readers. Let's stay in touch.
~~Califia
@Califia thanks for your feedback on fractured soul, you have been the first one and that means a lot since it is my first trial at writing thank you. And surely I'll give dominance factor a try it sounds interesting without doubts, I'll do it once I have finish the tattoed princess.