Grumpy Cat Still

Hey, so I am writing a book, and would be really grateful if someone could read 
          it and give me some suggestions for improvement. Thank you!
          
          The Silent Thread
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          "A longing not her own, a sorrow centuries old, and a name she had never spoken-yet had always known."
          
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          Lord Gray was exiled for a crime he didn't commit and a love that was out of his control.
          Natalie Deighton was killed for a love that was in her fate, a love which she couldn't avoid even if she reversed the time or changed her mind.
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          Betrayed by love, deceived by power, and robbed of his throne, Lord Gray turned to the only force that could grant him justice-dark magic. He vowed that the lineage of the king who wronged him would be erased from history. 
          And so, the kingdom fell to ruin, abandoned under the weight of his curse. But vengeance came at a cost, for in death, he was denied both peace and punishment. Immortality became his prison.
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          Sometimes, Primrose Thompson wakes up in the middle of the night with her cheeks wet, throat sore and her heart aching for a love which she couldn't understand, a love which wasn't hers, or was it?
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          Thank you for reading, and if you want to read the book, it can be found on my profile!

I hope you doing ok. Sorry i didn't see your message till now. But I message you on tiktok :)

If you’re looking for a Harry x oc fanfic, please check out Umbras by penjiminfranklin <3 https://www.wattpad.com/story/370828851?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=penjiminfranklin

hi, i’ve no clue if you remember me but i used to be cruciobee on here- i was wondering if you’d wanna reconnect? xx. (ps, your new works are as awesome as i remember your work being!)

Hi how are you? Idk if you had gotten my other message? But do you have wattsapp or TikTok it says I'm still friends will you on TikTok? We can talk there and for wattsapp for the phone number? I didn't know which account you were more active on so I message you on this on if that's OK.

Malfoy’s surrogate deserves so much hype. You are an amazing writer. I loved everything about this book. The friendships, the betrayal, the writing overall is very beautiful, it’s like I was living with the oc. Feeling what she felt, understand her mind. I hope you’re happy at this turn out because I know I am. Much love to you arthur. May both sides of your pillow be cold. 

Also, I've made a new story (one that I've actually finished this time!)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/374270952

I am reading Poison Ivy and I cannot begin to even tell you how grateful I am to you for writing it (and I havent even finished it!) Ivy's abuse story is so close to home for me. But the FEELS - oh the god damned feels. No story (and I mean no story EVER) has made me experience so many feels. Her and Dracos love is heartbreaking and heartwarming all at the same time. Thank you.

Hey Love!!! 
          
          You should publish “ The Muggle” as a paperback because that book is way too good to only be on Wattpad lol it needs to be added to my book collection ❤️

I'm hoping if I ask this here, I'll get clearer answers-
          I was reading the muggle, and i realised, when voldy was dying, his soul latched onto Harry cuz he was the nearest thing alive
          
          But the rest of his horcruxes are inanimate? 
          So why doesn't it just make some random thing in the house a horcrux?