@SwimmerVGirl Thank you!!! I am going to try to do a little clean up on the other chapters. I had someone critique it from the forums. She helped a lot. What she said made a lot of sense :) so I will be fixing those parts first so I can continue ;) I will try to finish that this weekend and hopefully another chapter I am working on right now :) I will attempt to update fast lol I hate waiting for books I like ;)