So I finished watching Persona 5 the animation a few days ago. And can I say... I simp for Ren(Who is known as Akira in the game). Now my big problem is, I can’t find any good Ren/Akira X Reader books. If I do find Ren/Akira x reader books, they are short and haven’t been updated in over a month or they don’t write properly and they also use the love at first sight trope that I hate. Why do I hate it? There is no development between the two. So some one-shots are out of the picture because one book I’ve just read was only using that trope.
When I saw that they don’t write properly, I mean capitalization, punctuation, and starting a new paragraph when someone new speaks. I saw a book that the description was good and looked cool, so at first, I thought it was going to written properly. I was wrong.
I am not saying this to bash people. I will still read books if they are written inproperly. But when they go like “hello””hi, how are you?”
There is no indication of who is speaking and it’s not a new paragraph. That mostly bugs me when there is 3 or more people in a scene.
Let’s saw that there are 3 people in a scene. 2 of them are talking to each other and the last person is just listening. After each time that person talks after the other person, you don’t need to say that they said it. If it’s a 2 people convo, every alternating dialogue of who is talking will be known after the first time you say who is saying it.
Ex:
“Hello” Person 1 greeted Person 2 and 3.
Person 2 smiled and waved to Person 1, while Person 3 nodded their head. “Hey. How are you doing today?” Person 2 asked.
“I’m doing great today, how about you?”
“Same thing for me”
“I guess I’m doing fine” Person 3 answered before staying quiet again.
“Well, are we all ready to go to the mall?”
Person 3 nodded their head to Person 2’s question. “I’m ready as well” Person 1 answered.