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@OFF_DA_WALL  yah sure 

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@niallersprincess1d96 umm for the Hayes Grier one maybe make the POVs a little longer and include more conversation maybe and I guess show a bit more of their feelings a bit with like blushing or stuttering when they talk so it's obvious for the readers I guess. I'm not really a writer but I've noticed this stuff in other books I have read, oh and maybe a date night in your story too : )