horlahmidey25

Hi [Mami Ralte]@MamiRalte1,
          
          I came across your story and was immediately drawn to your world-building and concept. I’m a beta reader who specializes in fantasy, and I’d love to offer a detailed, reader-focused perspective to help refine your work.
          
          When I beta read, I focus on clarity, pacing, and character development making sure your world feels immersive and your plot flows smoothly. I also pay attention to the emotional pull, dialogue, and how well the fantasy elements connect with readers. My feedback is always honest, constructive, and aimed at helping you strengthen your story while keeping your creative voice intact.
          
          If you’re open to feedback or looking for someone to go through a few chapters, I’d be happy to collaborate with you.
          
          Warm regards,
          horlahmidey25