@Man_of_Nature
Endfielding it.
And by it, let's just say...
my Industries
@ Man_of_Nature i somehow managed to explode all my machines in the factory
I am really bad at planning things
Yo! I just wanted to write to you now so I can adjust my writing if need be. Are you cool with me referencing your character and or story in my new one I'm writing? I'll credit you if you allow me to of course. I just thought your stories cool and would love to reference it if I'm allowed.
Feel free to say no though, can always come up with something else. :)
@Man_of_Nature Thank you so much! I'll let you know when the chapters up if you'll want to view it. :3
Sorry I just realized I didn't specify, I mean Ji-Yeon and her story specifically XD.
Ain't no way Priestess is planning on using violence and harm against the ultimate practioners of it. She CAN'T be that stupid right?
@Dragonman405 That 'something' should not be enforcing the 'fears and misunderstandings' of Originium to the point it now poses as an active threat instead of this whole 'greater good' thing she's thinks it is.
I'm a new reader and found you from the RDM story, absolute cinema.
Arknights does not have alot of fanfics that focus on worldbuilding that much and yours is so well done in that regard (Player race interacting with other races/nations etc etc)
I am curious about a few things, players in RDM use VR right? (SAO full dive type thing) and are not on desktop?
What is stopping a player from deciding they want to blend in and fully make a Terran Character model? For example Sankta/Sarkaz/Feline etc etc (I guess Dendalion can be counted as a feline if she wanted to lie)
Also the story in the start was so good, but now in this new arc we got no chapters about how other nations or terra as a whole is really adjusting to the players (Nothing much went down since the War honeslty, The story really lost momentum after the war arc, and since then it's moslty just been players interacting with one another 90% of the time and not with terrans, nothing wrong with that, just a shift i noticed from the start of the story where we had players interact with terrans alot more and we still have Laterano wanting to visit them a 2nd time, since the pope in the earlier chapters mentioned sending guns as gifts)
A chapter thats fully foused on Terran/Rhodes Island POV would really help put things together.
I did read this whole thing in one setting since it's so good so maybe it's just my perception that is off.
My one real complaint is the story seems to slowly sideline terra and keep the players simply among themselfs in their small community instead of them going out and causing new events, it would make sense if the players were planning on building a nation but I don't get that kind of impression, they are just chilling in that single city almost all the time. (With the exception of our seaborn hunters )
But other then that 10/10, most arknights stories are just short promts on AO3, yours easily lands in top 5 within the fandom.
@Watwit16 I don't mean them causing wars and what not, I meant them simply going or interacting with other nations or having actual dedicated rhodes island operators chapter, in general just wanting to explore terra, since they now know it's not just a game. What is stopping a player from idk going to Laterano and really taking a liking to the Law, becoming a catastrophe messanger, joining Victorian army, going to Kazdel and throwing his towel in with the Millitary Comission etc etc. New Shernoburg is nice don't get me wrong, but Admin does not seem to be interested in building a nation, and the players are not expanding or repairing the city beyond bare necessity. It would make no sense for all of them to remain in one place, or for the story to simply go: "Faction X becomes interested in Players, Faction X goes to New Shernoburg and event Y happens, Event Y is resolved, Faction X leaves" indefinitely. The story isn't bad by any means, we only had 2 "Arcs" so far afterall, I just think the story would slowly spiral down if they all just remain in a single city without character development.
@Watwit16 yeah that's right @Vernal39 haven't been updating since I was studying for my midterm exams last week, back to writing right now though. Also some minor plotlines will be written as side-stories, as the main story would focus on the major threats on Terra (eg. Seabron, Collapsals, Observers, etc.)
For maybe the reason why the player hasn't caused another big scene is probably because the admin is containing them
happi 201
@ Man_of_Nature “Are you the writer because you are Mann_of_Nature, or are you Mann_of_Nature because you’re the writer?”..
@thelyohx yeah, but it's pretty much on the bottom on the priority lists of fics that need updating.
@ Man_of_Nature yo I've just read your fanfic lobotomy corp x rwby, it's really good, are you working on that fanfic still?
Midterms almost over!!!!! Back to writing next week!!!!
@Man_of_Nature Watch everyone, he’s going to get in the zone before realizing he’s written a chapter and then some
Update on. Just a Nobody??
@Man_of_Nature I'll wait for the Drop. And if it take Longer i Will wait and Pray to you like a God. And What can i Say. I am a Sucker for a Good story i Hope you pass your Midterms
What is my director doing bro. Why is he in a jirai kei outfit
Permission to give a reference from your nobody project moon fic :)
discord server for those interested: https://discord.gg/Usxsr5ys
@Man_of_Nature uh, I think the link is expired. Is it alright if you send in a new one?
