
ceekaysmiles87
The Alphas Moonlight Mate!!! It's an awesome story! Could use a little editing tho, and I know you said your looking for ideas as where it could go.....hmmmm....well if you would consider my ideas, I've got a couple....ok so, the latest chapter you wrote Ali telling Cal that he knows he's preggers, so obvi you can start from there! Have Cal be excited but hella nervous at the same time, then have them have to tell their parents at the same time(meaning all 5 of them together) unless Vic finds out first (could have him pick Ali up from school that day cause Cal is gonna talk to his dads and have a time-obviously in the immediate future, like tuh-day! Haha! to tell them together) and school with the pregnancy, well depending on how long you make it, cause he's a werewolf, 3-6-9 months or whatnot, uh, have him do school in person til he starts showing a bit more, or ooohh! You can have his dad Ed do like some kind of concealment spell on him so that the humans that go to their school(and others) will only see him how they've been seeing him so they don't suspect a thing! Anyway those are just a few ideas for now, I'm kinda running outta space here, so I hope these help! I'd really like to see more of this story! Yeah, until whenever, great job so far auth and looking forward to more! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️5 rounds of applause!!!!!^v^

MysticGrl1
@ceekaysmiles87 - Well I’ll admit I like what you have suggested! I’d say a 7 to 8 month pregnancy and I like the concealment spell part too! I hope they write more to the story! If not you could pick it up from there and write it or co-write it with them. ❤️
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